By Jim Acosta and Kevin Liptak
Thu January 15, 2015
CNN
http://www.cnn.com/2015/01/14/politics/secret-service-cleans-house-after-scandals/index.html
after a vary ruff year for the secret service with people jumping the fence and getting all the way in to the white house in one incident. Four of the top secret service officials are out of the post but this does not mean that they have to leave he service. If they would like they could just be demoted in to a less of an important role. Along with the Four the head of the secret service fired and was replaced by Joe Clancy the former head of Obama's protective division.
Important fact to the story.
1. The 4 officials that are being replaced are responsible for investigations, technology, protections and public affairs
2. They could still technically stay with the Secret Service
3. The secret services are reasonable for the man armed with a small knife made it through the North Portico door and into the White House residence.
These facts are important because it shows that they were not doing their job right and that they deserve punishment. The most important facts in this article is that they are reasonable for a man armed with a small knife made it through the North Portico door and into the White House residence. Like that should never happened weather the president is home or not. And another fact is that they could stay in the service. I’m shocked by this because I would think why would you want them still on that team because if they could not handle that job why would you want them doing it at all.
This article is not really biased its more just telling us what is happening with this scandal. But overall I really liked the article and thought it had good information with all the facts about the scandals and what these officials did wrong to let this happen.
You have to make sure you use better grammar, "after a vary ruff year" and some other instances.
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